AICE Media Studies AS- Bovio-Hayes, N

 During my first week of post production I added more sound VFX  which was people said to do in the peer review. The sound VFX I used where add-ons from After Effects such as police sirens and car noises. I also, rearranged some scenes in a different order to make the 2 minutes flow better. Lastly, I took out the "to be continued" title card which was suggested by my teacher and classmates. 

  After presenting  I got a lot of feedback from my peers . The main thing they said was that I should add more VFX especially to the  street shot. Which I heavily agree  about. I was actually planning to add VFX to the street shot , but I ran out of time. But now since I have a little bit before I have to send my project to Cambridge so I can add those finishing touches such as  more VFX. Also, when getting feedback people said to  add more sound  e ffects.  One example they gave me was to add explosion soun ds  when there was smoke VFX on screen. Which  in my opi ni on will make the scene more impactful  in the long run .  The last thing  people said was to make the intro  t itle scene longer. On this screen it  has text that  explains what this story is going to be about . The r eason they said to make it longer was because they  couldn’t read the whole thing  b y the time the screen went away....